Thank you to all who commented on the first version of this, especially Raul, I noted your suggestions and it helped so much. I made some major changes which I wouldn't have if I hadn't gotten all those great comments. I must say I think my favorite part of this one is now the house that sits "down the street" because it is the looseness that I've been trying for. Please let me know your thoughts on this one and if it works better. Oil on canvas 12 x 16.