Landscape critique please

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ceekay23 wrote
on 24 Apr 2015 5:03 AM

Acrylic on wood 46 x 55cm

I have reloaded the picture so it is clearer


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tyneboy wrote
on 27 Apr 2015 10:32 AM

Nice bright painting, semi abstract.

The main critism I have is that it is a large landscape with no obvious focal points and would maybe benefit from the introduction of something to draw the eye into the picture

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ceekay23 wrote
on 27 Apr 2015 7:29 PM

Good point, Thank you tyneboy.

Unfortunately my original resized picture was a little blurry on this page but I have reloaded it, but  I do have some logs that I hope help with a lead in to the picture.  Are they maybe not enough?  I was worried it was a little too bright and maybe I should tone it down a little but was unsure how.

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