please take a look at two pastels completed last month and let know what could make them better. I've rekindled my interest in drawing and painting after a 30 year hiatus. Any feedback is appreciated.
I think they are both great starts, but it seems to me missing a strong focal point. I do not do a lot with landscapes, but find a building in the distance or some specific object draws the eye in. I reiterate that I don't do a lot of landscapes, so may be way off base.