Improvement through criticism

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Jobro01 wrote
on 19 Jul 2014 8:03 PM

Dear critics,

please take a look at two pastels completed last month and let know what could make them better. I've rekindled my interest in drawing and painting after a 30 year hiatus. Any feedback is appreciated.

cheers!

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k.jones wrote
on 22 Aug 2014 10:12 PM

I think they are both great starts, but it seems to me missing a strong focal point. I do not do a lot with landscapes, but find a building in the distance or some specific object draws the eye in. I reiterate that I don't do a lot of landscapes, so may be way off base.

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