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HSM wrote
on 13 Mar 2013 5:57 PM

16 x 12 oil

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ozimandus wrote
on 14 Mar 2013 11:00 PM

I like the colors, they give a good feel for the time of day, you have some conflicts in composition The none grassy areas lead to viewer to a dead end instead of further into the picture Try to avoid cutting your picture in half...your "dead end" is dead center and grabs the most attention because of the contrast of color and hard lines I hope this helps

 

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HSM wrote
on 15 Mar 2013 6:45 AM

Ozimandus,

Thank you for the critique.  It was an honest one which is what I was seeking.  I will take your words into consideration on my next work.

 

Thanks,

Holly

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