At the Farm

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ann wilson wrote
on 23 Apr 2010 10:43 PM

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Margo5 wrote
on 23 Apr 2010 10:51 PM

Very nice colors and I like the way that you have lead the eyes into the painting with the road. Nice perspective. The barbwire fence helps with that. You might want to make the foreground slightly darker and/or more detailed.

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ann wilson wrote
on 24 Apr 2010 10:33 AM

Thanks, Margo! I appriciate the advice!

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Robin11 wrote
on 7 May 2010 11:54 AM

Ann, you know I was going to say the perspective seemed off on the barn but I swear I've seen barns like that in real life!   I also love the colors and the softness you've achieved.  The only issue I see is the fence to the side of hte barn, it's sharp shapes seem to suggest that it's not finished yet.  But I am far from knowledgable on landscapes so take with a grain...no, a BOULDER of salt...just really wanted to say that I like it very much!!

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ann wilson wrote
on 7 May 2010 11:11 PM

Thanx, Robin! THis is actually my gandparent's barn. And everything I do always leaves me with that "unfinished" feeling...you know...always could be better..

Thank you for the critique. I appreciate it!

ann 

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