Artwork Title: Blue Jay
9x12 inch original pencil drawing using graphite pencils on acid free art paper
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I like this a lot. I enjoy the various shades of black and grey.
I would leave a little more room on the paper on top ...the bird's crest almost touches it, which is distracting. I would also leave a little more room on the paper on the right hand side, so that the bird wouldn't be so centered and so there would be a bit of space for the bird to " look into" even if birds don't look ahead.
I would encourage you to also draw from birds that have stronger lighting on them, so that you can get more of a sense of light and shadow to show even more depth.