Like some critique. New to painting.

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Fernisa wrote
on 19 Aug 2013 1:47 PM

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ALatorre wrote
on 12 May 2014 9:26 PM

Very nice. 

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marbydonna wrote
on 21 May 2014 10:09 PM

absolutely beautiful. a striking pose.

you've framed the eyes nicely.

 

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on 22 May 2014 5:30 AM

This is awesome! I love how you painted the eyes.

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4sadie wrote
on 3 Jul 2014 6:33 PM

a beautiful painting, those eyes are really captivating.  The only suggestion that I would make is to lighten up the lower part of the iris opposite the bright spot on the pupil---I would make it slightly to the right toward the outside edge, or not because it is a really nice picture.  If you are not sure draw an eye and practice moving the reflected light around the eye.  I don't paint humans, only animals, and that opposing bright spot seems to make the eye more alive.

 

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Hausamann wrote
on 20 Feb 2015 6:09 PM

Hello Fernisa.

Great painting. Very sensual due to the eyes and gesture. One thing that does seem out of place is the scarf around her face. The far left portion, past the nose, seems to be floating a gap between it and her right cheek. To check it, I would place a scarf around my face and see how it shapes around my face in a mirror. Otherwise, all looks great.

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