Farm House

baqar78 wrote

on 23 Feb 2010 7:20 AM

I have made this painting.Plz comment on it.

Robin11 wrote

on 24 Feb 2010 11:57 AM

It's sweet and a welcome sight with all the winter weather we've been having! Nice job with the perspective in the back, it really does look like a tree line in the distance, but don't be afraid to carry it all the way across.

The other nitpik I have is the tree on our right seems sort of translucent, you might want to firm that up more in order to tell the story that the tree is in front of of the greenery border.

The flowers are spaced a little more regularly than they are usually in real life up toward the fence.  I like the variety in spacing you have up toward the front better.

This is a charming painting!  What media?  Watercolor?   Size?

Margo5 wrote

on 24 Feb 2010 3:12 PM

You have a very interesting composition here. I like the simplicity of style. Good eye movement and nice, simple, but very effective architectural detail. The tree on the right might need for the tree trunk to mirror the work done on the tree trunk on the left. The painting is simple, refreshing and not overworked.

baqar78 wrote

on 25 Feb 2010 8:20 AM

Dear Robin

I am grateful to you for your kind comments and advices.U indeed took lot of effort to view my painting.It is water color and 14x21 inches.I am once again very grateful to you

baqar78 wrote

on 25 Feb 2010 8:25 AM

I am grateful to you margo.I think u r right.the one on left needs a little bit more of work.but i tell u it doesnot look that transparent on picture as it looks in computer.i certainly will work on it.i am grateful to you.i would like to see ur work as well.i am new to this site.please help me to make new friends.

Antonin2 wrote

on 25 Feb 2010 9:11 AM

I really apreciate the simplicity of the painting and the composition. Howerver I would have made the buildings a little bit more slappy with less details and to break those geometric forms.

Good job !

j.b2 wrote

on 25 Feb 2010 11:50 AM

A little C&C,

The trees in the far back backgroud need to be a little less angled. As objects reced in space they are less pointed and more rounded..

But all in all a nice job...

Margo5 wrote

on 25 Feb 2010 11:59 AM

Just click on our avatar pictures and that will take you to our bio pages. The bottom right hand corner shows our picture files with our paintings that are listed in the Gallerie. You can click on any one of them to get a closer look.

baqar78 wrote

on 26 Feb 2010 10:22 AM

I am grateful to you for your comments.I will keep in mind the points u made.Thank u

baqar78 wrote

on 26 Feb 2010 10:22 AM

I am grateful to you for your comments.I will keep in mind the points u made.Thank u