Watercolor Critique: "Sofie"

4 Nov 2009
Sofie
by Nora Velastegui Pettersson, 2004, watercolor, 22 x 18.

The artist has created an engaging portrait of a young woman. I especially like the simplicity of the nose and the mouth. The forehead has a great sense of roundness. Parts of the hair could be less linear, and this adjustment would put more attention on the face and delicate shadows that fall on the head. The texture of the hair does not need to be eliminated; there should just be less contrast between some of the strands of hair, especially on the left side of the painting.

There is not much of the blue shirt showing in this composition. Small shapes such as this do not require modeling, so I would like to see it presented more unified in value and slightly darker.

The original painting, with the critics suggested adjustments.

About the Critic

Dawn Whitelaw has studied painting with Scott Christensen, Cedric Egeli, Jim Pollard, and Everett Raymond Kinstler. In 2002 she received the Award of Excellence and Best of Show in an international competition sponsored by the Portrait Society of America, and she has exhibited her portrait, landscape, and still life paintings in juried shows organized by the Cumberland Society of Painters, the American Academy of Women Artists, and the Phoenix Historical Museum.

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eubie wrote
on 9 Dec 2009 7:11 PM

Great job with the smile and the eyes and the whole face..the stripes over the eye bother me a little..and the hair could be softer and whispier..you really do have a talent for faces...